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whipsnade
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since 2000-02-28
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0 posted 2000-03-03 07:17 PM


                
              
               LOTHLORIEN
    
       Lothlorien!
           A name to conjure with
       in search of perfect truth.

       A magic place by Tolkien's blessed heart
           devised and given to  mankind
       to find that sweet light of total love
           wherein each soul resides'

       The silvering sounds of gentle voices,
           childrens laughter,
       breezes whispering in harmony
           through singing elven chimes.
       lamps softly lit, glowing golden
           into the shadowed places
       warming all with love and joy who
           enter, for all time.

       Souls in rapture all complete,
           so sweet, so sweet.
       O Maker, bring my loved ones there
           that I may rest in peace.
       Lothlorien!      

© Copyright 2000 whipsnade - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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1 posted 2000-03-03 07:21 PM


How fasinating is this poem! Absolutely wonderful! I love it.  ellie

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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2000-03-03 07:25 PM


Although I don't understand the names, I love the serene beauty you describe.  Welcome.  Hope to find more from you.
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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3 posted 2000-03-03 07:48 PM


This is great, so much imagery, I love it.  Thanks for sharing it.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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4 posted 2000-03-03 08:48 PM


A Warm Welcome to you, WHIPSNADE,
Your poem is very interesting-it comes from a different perspective and gives us another view of how the Spiritual Journey translates into the lives of some.  We too, have our differences, but we share in common the seeking of the highest & most noble traits & blessing --such as is suggested in your work
"to find that sweet light of total love...souls in rapture all complete..."

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



whipsnade
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since 2000-02-28
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5 posted 2000-03-03 08:54 PM


  Thank you Ellie, sandgrain and BSC for your very kind words. This is my first public "exposure" of a very limited output created in a closet.  I will  continue to lurk however, enjoying  all of  your fine poetry   until I work up the courage  perhaps to sally forth again.
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
6 posted 2000-03-04 09:02 AM


From J.R.R. Tolkien? It's been a while, but I know he wrote of beautiful imaginary places and beings. Your poem is beautiful as well. I can imagine the childlike spirit and innocent love. Welcome to Spiritual Journeys!
Sincerely,
Rwood

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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7 posted 2000-03-04 08:18 PM


WELCOME!  You sure paint a serene, calming picture.

Please check your email for a special welcome!

whipsnade
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since 2000-02-28
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8 posted 2000-03-04 11:21 PM


To Deleeme and rwood,, thank you for your welcoming  comments,, and  yes Tolkien was the spark {I dasn't call it inspiration} for that  effort. Back  in  the 70's  I read the trilogy to my  younger kids when we were blessed with  a busted tv for 2 years. I became  hooked on these "kids" books and fell entirely in love with his inspired works.. To wht dove thank you for the lovely card and encouragement
  To  BSC  and  cassie I  offer the following of my efforts in hopes it  may offer   some solace  and  insight. DEJA VUE

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
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Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
9 posted 2000-03-04 11:39 PM


Whips:

Your title lured me out of my lair (Critical Analysis).  I just had to mention that it was refreshing to know that someone else recognized the biblical allegory in Tolkien's Middle-Earth novels.  Tolkien would have trouble with me calling it "allegory" if he was still alive but, hey, what else would you call the "twelve" followers of Gandalf in the Hobbit (the dwarves), the distinctly Christian view of divine providence portrayed in "The Fellowship of the Ring" at Lothlorien when Frodo asked "why" he was chosen, and of course the most obvious, Gandalf being swept off the bridge at Kadz'dum (sp?) by the Balralg (demon), battling with it in the abyss for three days, dying and being raised from the dead gloriously.

Thanks for bringing this back to me.

Jim

whipsnade
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10 posted 2000-03-05 10:49 PM


  To Jbouder
    Thanks for that very succinct and perceptive overview. I confess that  in my many readings I was so awash in his absorbing imagery, plot and romance that only some of the parallels you draw   occurred to me in passing and  I didn't correlate them metaphorically. Well done sir...
               Ricardo  {whips}


 

jbouder
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since 1999-09-18
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Whole Sort Of Genl Mish Mash
11 posted 2000-03-06 11:54 AM


Thanks, Ricardo.  If you're interested in perusing this subject further I would recommend a book entitled "Myth, Allegory and Gospel" edited by John Warwick Montgomery.  It's a fascinating book with interesting insights into the writings of Tolkien, C. S. Lewis and Williams (The "Inklings").  After reading this book I think it is clear that there is not so much of a "different perspective" here that at first meets the eye.  Thanks again for the read.


 Jim

"If I rest, I rust." - Martin Luther


Alle'cram
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Texas
12 posted 2000-03-10 01:15 AM


This is a lovely poem. It has such a calming effect. I have learned a lot by reading the posts to this poem. Thanks for sharing the information AND this beautiful poem.
Marcy

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