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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

0 posted 2000-03-03 07:05 PM


The drawer of gloves was a sight
There was black, red, yellow and white
Some new, some stiff, from small to huge
Some without mates, others in twos

Leathery thick or warn so thin
I saw no use in any of them
But to plant a rosebush in the yard
I wore the thick black ones, leathery and hard

My fingers were spared from the thorns
By these stiff old gloves I'd warn
Then a single plastic yellow one
I wore to get a cleaning job done

The white pair, practically worn through,
Dusted crevices where a rag wouldn't do
The red ones with elasticity,
For painting, had worked perfectly.

Each served a purpose on command,
covering a well intentioned hand.
We're each very much like a glove.
Jesus within, gives us purpose with love.



© Copyright 2000 Rae Petersen - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-03-03 07:51 PM


What a terrific poem, you seem to be able to make one think, using the most common things. Gloves, it's great.  Thank you for all of your kind comments to me, and for sharing yourself here.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-03 08:05 PM


Dear Sandgrain; Great analogy. We are the only hands that Jesus has. The image that we are the glove and He the hand inside, is very profound and yet so simple. Lovely!
                       love, Ellie

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-03-03 08:18 PM


Sandgrain,
  I say with all sincerity, I admire how you put thoughts and ideas together, like a perfect marriage unting the outward object with the inward truths, simple and yet sublime--like the hand and glove. What obvious wisdom, and ability are manifest in your precious poetic nuggets.  Thank you so much, I appreciate you,  David


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



clynng2003
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since 2000-03-01
Posts 13

4 posted 2000-03-03 09:05 PM


Great poem! You have a gift, keeping letting us see it!
mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
5 posted 2000-03-04 01:09 AM


far out you continue to inspire us with the most simple things!  What an awesome poem, thanks!
rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
6 posted 2000-03-04 08:32 AM


Wow sandgrain. You help us see so much in so little. I appreciate and admire this ability. The depth in which it travels is so close to the heart. Thank you so much for the inspiration and wonderful poetry and comments. It's a true blessing to me.
Sincerely,
Rwood

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 2000-03-04 11:58 AM


You always impress me with your enormous talent and wisdom Sandgrain ...  This piece is simply wonderful, my dear ....  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon






WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-03-04 08:36 PM


LOL @ those analagies.  You have many more where those came from don't ya?  hahaha...
Yes, you've done a great job with this mom!
Stories and analagies everyone can relate to.
Thank you for being here! I'm so glad to be able to see you share what you have with others!  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 2000-03-07 04:00 PM


Bonnie, ellie,David, clynng, mirjam, rwood, pepper and Wht.Dove, heartfelt thanks to each of you for your encouraging comments.  Some of the stories, I've heard or read long ago, so they're not all my origins, but I love setting them to verse and am delighted others find food for thought in them.  Guess that's what much of my poetry consists of.... analogies.  God bless each of you.
Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
10 posted 2000-03-07 06:01 PM


Sandgrain, I almost missed this one. Wow!!
It is a great poem. The most common thing (like a drawer of gloves) and turn it into such a powerful, flowing message. Thanks for sharing. I wish I had this kind of talent!!!
keep 'em coming.  Marcy

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

11 posted 2000-03-08 03:18 PM


imaginative and inspiring...wonderful words of lessons of life.
very nice sandgrain.
take care, janet marie

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