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mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-02-29 11:36 PM



I'd made an appointment
with Christ to meet Him at the cross;
was running late one day,
failed to arrive the next.
He hung there, a picture of patience -
carrying the weight of the world
upon His shoulders, just
waiting for me to shrug off
my pride and humble myself
before His bloodied feet.

It was when I'd stopped
rescheduling these neglected appointments
that my parched soul
screamed it's need,
and when i crawled the
hill of calvary and
hung my head before Him,
I was not scolded for my previous
unattendance.
"I've missed you my child." He simpy said.
"I'm glad you could make it.
Now let's get down to work!"

And together we crucifed sin;
together we rose from the dead,
together we live a life of victory,
praising our Father above.

© Copyright 2000 mirjam - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-29 11:58 PM


Mirjam this was WOW! How true! You really summed it up!
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-03-01 12:13 PM


Mirjam, Your words speaks volumns. Jesus is so patience and extends His love as we humble before Him. Well written. Heart felt.
God Bless
Alle'cram

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-03-01 05:43 AM


Mirjam,
You speak of a most beautiful rendezous, one which if we would realize as such, would cause us to put it at the head of our list--and not keep Jesus Hanging.  I enjoyed how you expressed this, Jesus working together with us to affect that crucifixion, that resurrection, that victory over sin to the Praise and glory of God.  AMEN!  David
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 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-




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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-03-01 06:47 AM


Oh Mirjam, this took my breath away. I wish this poem could be on every billboard across the country, think how many would stop and think. Jesus wrote this poem directly on your heart, because, as I read it I could feel His love so profoundly. Thank you, thank you, ellie

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
5 posted 2000-03-01 09:39 AM


This poem speaks volumns in not so many words just as someone else has said above. Good message we all need to heed.

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-03-01 09:33 PM


mir, this is excellent...a poem of such a strong message...thank you for making me think about this today. well done! JM
mirjam
Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
7 posted 2000-03-02 12:38 PM


thank you all for your comments!

David - i'm glad you picked up one of my main points - that as joint heirs with Christ we work together for the glory of God, and for us to be forgiven we must first humble ourselves before Him and place those things on the cross - he can't do that part without our help.  You always give such responsive comments - thanks.

and ellie - i think He did too because i woke up the other morning and had about 15 minutes before my alarm went off so i lay in the dark praying and just thinking, and the idea and the words just came so i wrote them down - isn't it cool when that happens? Amen eh? Amen.  

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

8 posted 2000-03-02 07:03 AM


Sister poet and dear friend - you are an awesome writer - and inspiration to me - know that?

Well done!!!

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
9 posted 2000-03-02 07:37 AM


So profound and so moving. Thank God for the ending. Surrendering and Strong. Thank you!
Sincerely,
Rwood

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
10 posted 2000-03-02 07:40 AM


Mirjam - What a glorious poem, makes one take pause and realize He' always patient, always there, thanks for sharing this.
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
11 posted 2000-03-02 12:00 PM


What beautiful, humbling work, how often we let the affairs of this world distract us from that which is of True and Lasting Value, a personal relationship with our Savior. Thanks for posting this one. Dennis :^)

 Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^)

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
12 posted 2000-03-02 08:39 PM


Kamla, rwood, bsc, and Dennis, my replies always end up sounding repitious and boring, but thanks for reading and giving me such warm comments - i really appreciate all you guys so much!  

Severn, am i really an inspiration to you? I thought you were one to me!

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
13 posted 2000-03-03 10:00 AM


A fantastic writing bringing out 2 points rartely written about.  As we put Him off on our schedules, He's suffering greatly, and as before mentioned, that we, too, partake of the death, burial and resurrection as joint heirs.  Beautifully done!  Thank you.
Denise
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Posts 22648

14 posted 2000-03-03 10:14 AM


This is excellent, Mirjam! A true blessing!

Denise

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