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Soleil
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since 1999-06-12
Posts 113


0 posted 2000-02-27 08:49 PM



To the Rapture can one be bound
In the story of the lost and found
In rising waters where salmon flounder
Making their way home to the green-blue sea.
And with morning comes the possibility
Of tranquil mystic art, framed in purple.
You are who you are from the start
A soft murmur coursing past river pebbles
As untimed chances shoot by in the dark.
An i before e except after c
A child let loose in life's swift lunacy
And a beacon to my yet unseen eternity.

© Copyright 2000 Soleil - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-27 10:12 PM


wow this is beautiful, amazing imagery and it has such a calming effect on the reader..very nice work..thank you for sharing it here with us.
take care, janet marie

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2000-02-27 10:38 PM


Enjoyed your writing and thoughts it carried.
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-28 03:04 AM


Peaceful and tranquil...lovely and so beautifully flowing. ellie

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-02-28 10:25 AM


Lovely poem!
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