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Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2000-02-22 06:34 PM



In the Light of Love Above


Flowers forever fragrant, dance in bloom
When Heaven’s glittery gate opens
Birds beautiful harmony whistle their tune
In the light of love above


Hourglass of sand, no longer we will know
In picturesque soft meadows of time
Endless breezes of summer’s show
In the light of love above


Forever souls of destiny in sunsets blush
Colours radiant rainbow in June
Beats for eternity in hearts humble hush
In the light of love above


Marina Feb 16/2000

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
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Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 2000-02-22 06:57 PM


To think one day His grace will bring us all together there.  I felt a joyous relaxation through your wonderful lines.  Thank you.
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-02-22 07:19 PM


Marina; There is a peace and comfort in your words. It's amazing, because that's exactly what I need right now after a very stressful situation. Thank you, Ellie

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OWPEMT
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since 2000-02-14
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389 Noble Road West, Shiloh, Ohio 44878 USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 08:34 PM


I to had a long day, and found peace in reading your work, thanks
Sandy

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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4 posted 2000-02-22 10:06 PM


Marina,
this is SO beautiful...so calming and peaceful  very lovely imagery...very nice work.
take care, janet marie

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-02-22 10:10 PM


This is a beautiful discription of Heaven! It really touched me! Keep up the good work!

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-02-22 10:11 PM


Welcome!


In the Light of Love above, so many Good things can happen. What a wonderful poem!



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There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
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Pickering, Ontario
7 posted 2000-02-22 11:09 PM


Thank you to everybody...I'm glad that such a simple poem can bring people so much hope and pleasure.  I firmly believe that there is a better place waiting for all of us and this was just my idea of my Heaven.

Marina

Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
8 posted 2000-02-25 09:12 AM


A beautiful poem, Marina.  Eloquent.


Michael

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
9 posted 2000-02-25 09:04 PM


What a tranquility & serenity you pain with your welcome words , describing heaven in things we can readily grasp & enjoy,  Good job here Marina.. Thank You,  David
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