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kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

0 posted 2000-02-10 06:16 PM


I lost my way
But I felt I had to stay
Oh now you know
The ending to this place

I followed anger
I followed fear
I was betrayed
And I ended up right here

I need a body
I need a soul
To find the feeling
That I let go

Take my hand now
Come follow me
And we'll embrace
And we'll be free

Another day
But I felt I had to stay
Oh angel hold
This life you took away

I'd walk through ashes
I'd walk through fire
It was delayed
But you ended up right here

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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-10 07:11 PM


Kari, this poem touches me..its very beautiful, with a lovely sentiment
take care, janet marie

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-02-10 08:41 PM


Very nice  

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-10 08:44 PM


Lovely, thank you.

 02

dovesongs
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
4 posted 2000-02-11 08:03 PM


Walking away from God's love is the most miserable of times a person that knows the joy of God's love can ever suffer.  It is good that he is a patient God and loves us despite our foolishness.  Keep right on writing... very good.  God Bless
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