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Nimphf84
New Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 4
Oshkosh, WI

0 posted 2000-02-09 04:38 PM


There is this flower in the field,
her great beauty she has concealed.
With no sun nor any rain,
her dear life she cannot sustain.
Try as I may try as I might,
I fear her battle she'll no longer fight.
All my love I try to send,
but for her I know not how to defend.
Against the fears from within,
this battle together we must win.

Thank you all for all your help.
I find myself with lacking ing the assistance
department.  I am not very good at commenting. But I thank you for yours.

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 Ferd Nimphius

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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-09 05:23 PM


I don't see spirtiual significance here, but I do see love for another. The best we can do for another when it's out of our hands is to pray for them. For what we can't do, God can.< !signature-->

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When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?


[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-09-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-02-10 03:24 AM


Love! What it's all about. Thank you.

 02

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-02-11 07:48 PM


Yes, the lilies of the field...How beautifully God dresses the fields with flowers.  Sorry for the sadness you feel, but remember everything does have reason in God's plan, and it's so difficult for us to understand.  At times like that I have to pray for stronger faith.  Bless you.
dovesongs
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
4 posted 2000-02-11 07:53 PM


Very expressive.  I can feel the power of love, sadness and fear in your poem.
God can help you conquer the fearand  give you the strength to get throught the sad times.  You will be in my prayers.  God Bless ...  

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