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shock gospel
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-02-06 05:00 AM


I created you.. in the image of me..not some fuzzy monkey in a tree.
You wonder why you live you life in futility,
in theology, "To be or not to be"
My Spirit gave birth and my image walked the earth.
With Me, untill the woman came first.
So I watched my image fall.. but knew soon that they would call
when again their spirits would thirst.
The story's real simple, I wrote it all down,
so I wouldn't have to watch you all stumble around.
But you make up your own books.. the mind fill of fools.
When you need to let My Spirit teach you
and bring your but back to school.
I created you.. in the image of Me, the power in your tongue to wither a tree!
Do you have any Idea or the slightest clue,
what an image of Me is able to do.
What can I say I've done all that I can, creating Myself in this image called man.
If you'll just quit debating and silence your tongues.
You'll see there's an answer..
It's Jesus my Son.


 

© Copyright 2000 shock gospel - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-02-06 09:13 AM


TERRIFIC! Jesus is the beginning and the end, tha Alpha and Omega! Well done. You do a good job of giving us food for tought.

 02

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 2000-02-06 10:01 AM


I could not have said it better, I like your style of writing, and your message was perfect.
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-02-06 12:23 PM


Shock, this info is so needed for this evolution, blob to man, public school teaching our children are getting today.  What a tremendous impact the truth makes on one who'd merely considered themselves decendents of blob.  Thanks for such great writing.
Willem
Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 139
Inverness, FL, USA
4 posted 2000-02-06 02:21 PM


Yes, your poems are shockers!  But many people, even some that call themselves Christians, do need this kind of shock treatment to help them recognize the monkey business of Darwinism for what it really is: a desperate attempt to deny the existense of a Creator, the only force that could have created a creative creature, homo sapiens...

Willem

LoveBug
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5 posted 2000-02-06 03:23 PM


Great poem! I agree with the above posts, also! My science teacher really needs to hear this!  

 "To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world"

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-02-06 08:20 PM


Another truthful poem! Psst...please check your spelling as you never know when one would like to send this poem as an email to someone!  

Only one thing I want to point out that bothers me, and not to take away from your poem.  But women was not created first. Actually if you'll notice in Gen 1:27, now this is still the 6th day, God created "man" in our image. First the animals and then people.

Then when Adam was created Gen 2:8, it is different, if you'll notice it is the 8th day, and Adam was made, and then the animals that he was to use. Our domestic animals. Farm animals.
I do believe that was put how it was to draw attention to that fact.

I really do like your poem, it is straight and to the point! Well done!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

thumper4him
Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27
Newport Beach Ca
7 posted 2000-02-06 09:25 PM


okay, somebody else that can ryhme.  My goodness, this poem was wonderful!! I will print it out and show it to my friends at school tomorrow!(if you don't mind)  I love to hear, read and write poems that are sort of twisters in the end.  Where you are talking about something so simple and clear and bring it home to the reader when they realize it is about god. That is the way to true witnessing.  It is the way to show how simple and clear his love is and how clear the real answer is.

 you can't make footprints in the sand of times that you are sitting down

dovesongs
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102
Michigan
8 posted 2000-02-06 09:41 PM


Ditto to the other comments.  I like the honesty and the SHOCK value of this.  You have a wonderful way with words that really hit the mark.  Amen and right on...
(except for the female first thing)  
You have talent!

shock gospel
Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 33

9 posted 2000-02-06 09:44 PM


WhtDove ,
My referance to "The woman came first.."
is relative to Adam taking her up on her offer to join her in sin, therefore giving Adam the choice of putting Gods comandment first or the womans request first(and you know she was goood lookin and Adam didn't wanna sleep on the couch!). Well we all know how that turned out. I believe the whole verse was,
My Spirit gave "birth" (man created)
and My "image"(man) walked the earth
With Me,(man walking with God) Until the woman(which came after Adam) came first.
Of course again refering to Adam doing the Eve thing ect. ect.    
                   well.. golly shocks

Majestic
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
10 posted 2000-02-07 10:50 PM


cain't we all just get along...lol

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
11 posted 2000-02-08 11:10 AM


Alright, I guess I missed that point, but it's well taken!  I understand what you're saying now! Yes, indeed.

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
12 posted 2000-02-08 06:08 PM


Wonderful ^i^

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


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