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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
I watch dust mites swim into that stream of sunlight, jerk away in a current of sudden air to swirl spiral slow dance down and settle on the heart. It is my heart, drooped precariously over the altar edge, a modified Dali in the making. I placed it there, an offering lacking reluctance. It's incessant beat sings "I sur -ren- der," while another melody capers this chapel's stone walls: "Holy, holy, holy is the Lord." Their voices are strings of a harp, this angelic host surrounding the sacrifice like hungry vultures. I close my eyes to the pressure of peace, feel His gentle hand descend upon this deadened heart. Stretched taut across the altar, it opens, inhales new life, exhales freedom. Gold dust now coats the sacrifice, and I know that etched upon it's beating structure is the Father's will; perfect and holy. I pick it up, and wear it into the world. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Mirjam, The matter of true self-sacrifice is not an easy matter-nor one to be attempted lightly, but whole heartly in the spirit of total surrender to the will of God. The poetic picture accurately paints the solemnity of it, and that difficulty, but also shows the blessed fruit of such submission, by divine enrichment. The depth of the details here described --suggest to me, that it was written by one who has so experience such in her life. Thank you for sharing it with us. "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is pretty deep! Really makes ya stop and think. Man, I just love this place! I'm so glad you all are here to share your experiences with us! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
How glorious is this poem! You've captured the pure essence of God's message of total surrender. The angels surely help you write this one. 02 |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
David - thanks for your lovely comment - you certainly reap in the blessings when you follow God's will over your own... thanks for reading!!! Whtdove - i'm glad it made you think - you're right, isn't this such a wonderful place - i don't know what i'm going to do when university starts up again - i guess God will provide me with even a little bit of time to spend here... you guys are great, your poetry is great... we could go on more but I'll just say thanks so much and leave it at that. Ellie - thanks! You're right, they sure did! (isn't it cool when a poem just flows out of you and you know the holy spirit helped or even did it for you? AMEN!). |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mirjam, this is a very beautiful and graceful poem... sometimes it does seem like we have angels looking over our shoulders helping us find the right words...take care Janet Marie |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
How picturesque...my heart draped over the alter.. Truly a beautiful writing that wouldn't be possible without the reality of your commitment behind it. Bless you |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
Peace, such sweet peace when one gives their lives into God's loving hands. So eloquently written, graceful and shows the truth of God's great love for us. This is a masterpiece. Fabulous. I am so grateful God led me to this place. You are all fantastic in here. |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
wow thanks guys - i am touched by your comments it's so nice to get feedback from such supportive wonderful friends! Graceful the poem may be, but without the Grace of God I wouldn't have been able to write it! Bless you all! |
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