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Geo
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since 1999-12-29
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0 posted 2000-01-22 11:33 PM


LIFE
Life is like a boat on the ocean
At birth your set adrift
You learn to weather the storms
To ride the waves
Or be crushed into the reefs
Sink or sail
But at the end
You ultimatly
Return to shore.


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
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1 posted 2000-01-23 03:07 AM


Geo; divine simplicity- we do ultimately return to shore. It's who's steering  the boat that's the big question.

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-01-23 04:21 AM


Geo, this is a good comparison and illustration of life--and just life life itself, it is brief, but makes a statement--Good Job!   David
Denise
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3 posted 2000-01-23 01:32 PM


Much truth is this little piece, Geo! I enjoyed this very much!  
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-01-23 03:39 PM


Geo this was wonderful! How true!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-01-23 07:33 PM


Dear Geo; I'm so touched by your response to my poem! Thank you very much!

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