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catslair
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-01-19 10:09 PM


SOMETIME, SOMEWHERE, SOMEHOW.

Sometime, somewhere, somehow
The fragments of my experiences
Will fit together and complete the picture
That is the story of my life
And every piece will play a part
In making the scene complete

Separately their relative importance
Is obscured from view
But piece by piece, as they come together
Sense comes from nonsense
And understanding from confusion

Letting the pieces fall together naturally
Is one of our greatest challenges of life
As ego has us attempting to rearrange them
In a vain attempt to feel in control
And to influence that which is pre-ordained

By letting go the need to control
And abandoning this human condition
We can start to allow life to support us
In the way that was divinely intended


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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-19 10:40 PM


WELCOME!!  This is so very true! That last verse is the clincher! I loved this, and what a great reminder!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-19 10:50 PM


Wonderful poem, so full of truth and wisdom! Well done!  
deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-01-20 06:31 AM


Your poem gives a wonderful insight and message--Life can be so puzzling at times-But since God designed us & providentally cares for us, as we believe in Him & trust our lives to Him--He can make all the incongrous parts fit together in a marvelous way, make us truly whole!  Thank you for the  delightful reminder.

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-01-20 08:25 AM


thanks for your reply.
I enjoyed reading your poem. I can relate to it well. The only way to give God control is to be willing to let go of it. Welcome and lets hear more!


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catslair
Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48

5 posted 2000-01-20 09:34 AM


thankyou all for your lovely replies.....they were all great......as i am not sure i can maintain the standard set here....all i will do is try......and am thanful for the opportunity.....so thanks again!!!!
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