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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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I am unfolding gently beneath your loving touch Becoming I let wholeness breath my petals free Awareness Sweet fragrant Spirit touching senses into life Wisdom Giving beauty back to the universe Knowing Each petal, sweet miracle of life Oneness We are hues of color, yet one in Spirits blossom |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
A very beautiful first post. Very good imagery. Roses are my favorite flower, beautiful but tender, they need that special care. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Your poem is as lovely as the flower's imagery you used and as sublime as the beauties of the spiritually enhancing treasures you sweetly urged upon us. A very good start indeed! We will look forward to more! David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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don juan New Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 1 |
very nice poem---excellent imagery---would love to see more of your work!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Ellie, sorry I missed this! Seems a few have slipped by me! I do love this and the resemblance tween the rose and spirit. They are both delicate yet strong in their own way. Very well done! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is as beautiful as the rose itself! Very lovely, Ellie! Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful poem. I can't wait for your next one! Nathan |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
You guys are so great. Thanks! I'm feeling a all goosebumpy with all this love flying everywhere. You're all terrific! 02 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I love this poem, your words are so descriptive and expressive. This is one of the best poerty sites I have ever visited. I am so impressed by your talents and by the respect and support that all share here. take care,JanetMarie |
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Geo Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 73Nebraska |
I REALLY liked this!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear janet and geo; thank you very much! 02 |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
beautiful poem! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
ellie i'm sorry i seemed to have missed this one too - been away for a while. Loved it of course - i loved the first line especially - unfolding to His touch...gives me goosebumps! Thanks for blessing me with this beautiful poem today! |
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