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Kevin Taylor
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since 1999-12-23
Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

0 posted 2000-01-11 02:27 AM


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Brittle-winged and ancient, more than names,
Forgotten, nameless now and shadow blessed, appear
In astigmatic dapple dancing frames
Between the visioned vista and the seer

Across the rippled fractions of my sight
As far as, ample eyed, my eyes concede
Beyond the barren blindness of the night
In villanelles of light and darkness lead

Above the choral pine and hemlock choirs -
There, splintered cold refracts from eye to ear
The snow! The sky! The night! The stars! The fire!
Above! Across!

              My God!...

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 Kevin


[This message has been edited by kevintaylor (edited 01-17-2000).]

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blueyz75
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
1 posted 2000-01-11 09:52 AM


Love the language use.  Very poetic.  

Kelly


 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-01-11 10:09 AM


What imagery! A fine poem it is!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-11 04:18 PM


I love the language in this, too, Kevin! Very beautiful!

 Denise


Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2000-01-13 09:53 AM


Great poem Kevin, love the first stanza.

Michael

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