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resurrection part 2

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24

Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-01-10 09:05 PM

---He hung there---
his head drooped like a wilting flower -
drained of all strength and power,
picked and left subject to the heat of the sun.
But watered by his father's
tears above, this flower bloomed again -
and scattered his seeds afar.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 2000-01-10 09:41 PM

He has risen! Wonderful!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark

Jer
Member

since 1999-12-02

Posts 443
USA

2 posted 2000-01-10 11:40 PM

GREAT ending! It was powerful. The imagie of Jesus being a flower and spreading his seeds was so cool. I liked it.

*~* Come work for the Lord. The work is hard, the hours are long and the pay is low. But the retirement benefits are out of this world. *~*

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-11 04:27 PM

You write some powerful little poems, Mirjam! Excellent!

Denise

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 264
houston, tx.

4 posted 2000-01-12 12:15 PM

truly the name of Jesus is spreading...

mirjam
Member

since 1999-11-24

Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand

5 posted 2000-01-13 02:57 AM

wtdove - ISN'T IT???

Jeremy - the ending of my poem wasn't as powerful as the end of those 3 days at calvary!!!  Thanks for your encouragement brother.

dsnyder, you write some pretty powerful stuff too my friend and don't you forget it!  Thanks sweetie.

Majestic, how nice to meet you!  Thanks for reading - i look forward to reading your work!!  Exciting to witness the spread isn't it?  (and be a part of it of course!)

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 2000-01-13 10:06 AM

This compliments the first piece so well...
great ending, I must agree with Jer. Wonderful, mirjam.

Michael

Shirleeah Storey
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 68
Delaware

7 posted 2000-01-13 12:05 PM

Just as powerful as the first. Knowing that He rose is enough to take with you for a long time to come.
Proud as always to read your poem. Honored to have shared it with others.

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