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mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 2000-01-10 09:04 PM


idea kind of extended from REAL...

---He hung there---
arms outstretched like a dove
spread on the cross for us, out of love
But his wings although ruptured
by nails flew once more -
still shelter his young
and with them soar.

© Copyright 2000 mirjam - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-10 09:38 PM


Excellent mirjam! I loved this, short and strong!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
2 posted 2000-01-10 10:14 PM



I enjoyed this, anything can heal through Him.

Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
3 posted 2000-01-10 11:37 PM


Great message Mirjam. Short but very strong with the point!

 *~* Come work for the Lord. The work is hard, the hours are long and the pay is low. But the retirement benefits are out of this world. *~*

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
4 posted 2000-01-11 04:04 PM


thanks guys!!!
p.s. Jeremy i like your little saying down the bottom - what a cool thought! (retirement)

Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-11 04:26 PM


Amen! So short yet says everything!

 Denise


Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
6 posted 2000-01-12 12:14 PM


beautiful...heart wrenching...
Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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California
7 posted 2000-01-13 09:55 AM


So much said in this little piece, great work, mirjam. No better place to be than under those wings.

Michael

Shirleeah Storey
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 68
Delaware
8 posted 2000-01-13 12:03 PM


My friend this is truly wonderful.  I was encouraged just from reading it. Thank you for your touching, inspirational words.
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