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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-01-04 08:17 PM



As some of you know, this is from Poetry #5 but it fits even better here. I didn't mention it in Poetry #5 but, I added some new lines to give it a better feel.

She helps me,
whenever I'm in need.
Whenever God isn't around,
she's always there to be found.
I consider myself fortunate to have her
because, she keeps me from falling down under.
She always bail me out of trouble
and she keeps me well-grounded and humble.
I don't know how life would be,
if she wasn't there for me.
I probaly, would have been more negative
and more dejective.
In a lot of ways,
she has molded me into what I am today.
She's always been there for me,
since a baby,
in the cradle.
She's my guardian angel,
a beautiful woman with a halo.
I've never wondered why,
she's in my life
because, I know that she's a gift from paradise.

 Nathan

© Copyright 2000 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-01-04 10:23 PM


Sounds like a gift, to have such a person as this. Thanks for sharing!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
2 posted 2000-01-05 11:31 AM


Thank you Whtdove for the nice comment!

 Nathan

Shirleeah Storey
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 68
Delaware
3 posted 2000-01-05 02:40 PM


Nate - You truly have a gift from above in the guardian angel you have.  Always remember the blessing in finding a good thing!  Cherish it!  I love this piece very much and it's touched my heart deeply.  Stay blessed and continue to write.
Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2000-01-05 05:23 PM


Thank you Shirleeah for that beautiful comment and may God bless you too!

 Nathan

Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 2000-01-06 12:43 PM


What a lovely tribute to your angel Nate.....and a poem beautifully written
I must have missed the first one at Open 5.....sure glad I found it here   < !signature-->

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
  Shannon


  


[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 01-06-2000).]

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
6 posted 2000-01-06 07:08 PM


Thank you Pepper for the sweet comments!

 Nathan

mirjam
Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
7 posted 2000-01-06 09:03 PM


loved this piece too Nate - it really makes you think about those angels we read about in the bible and hear stories of even now days, but don't tend to take seriously enough to consider yourself ever encountering one.  Sounds like your experiences of one aren't just an encounter, but a friendship so special it is truly a gift from God - hold on to it and give thanks!!!  Thanks for sharing and giving me something delightful to think about on a day spent home sick.       
Majestic
Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
8 posted 2000-01-16 12:31 PM


Wow..this would be a great poem for Mom's...Though the title hints at that anyway...For what is a mother but a childs gaurdian angel...And what are we but Gods children...Personally I'm glad He loves us enough to send angels to watch over us...great poem..
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
9 posted 2000-01-16 02:33 PM


Really enjoyed this.  Yes, our Lord is constantly watching over us.  We see so much proof, then still forget at times.  You sound fervent in your awareness.  That's great!
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