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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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Missouri

0 posted 1999-12-30 07:23 PM



         A Desert Dream

The sun beat hot upon my brow
My feet were giving out
My lips were parched from
From the desert heat
I was ready for defeat

Then I gazed across
The arrid, dusty horizon
Seeing a white bearded old man
Drinking from a sparkling fountain

I drew closer, watching him drink
"Is the water good? I said
He answered with a nod
Saying, "It's the best there ever was."

So I cupped my hands
In the sparkling fountain
Bringing the cool water to my lips
In a moment I was refreshed

Looking up to thank the man
He had vanished as a dream
I have often wondered who he was
For he looked as old as Methuselah

I've often thought that maybe
He never died
But comes to drink
At the sparkling fountain
Living forever in the desert's mountains

If I ever meet him again someday
I want to thank him
For the refreshing drink
For the strength, it gave me
To go on, when I was ready for defeat.

© Copyright 1999 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
blueyz75
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 138
IL
1 posted 1999-12-30 07:56 PM


Almost like an angel.  Strange how they work!

 I love the male body, it's better designed than the male mind.---Andrea Newman

mirjam
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since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
2 posted 1999-12-31 12:09 PM


that is so cool!!!  I loved this - isn't it so cool how when we are in a desert place and feeling thirsty, He leads us to a place of refreshing and gives us strength to carry on - loved the metaphor!  
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-01-01 04:20 PM


So wise is he who knows what to thirst for!  I enjoyed your poem.
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 2000-01-02 07:23 AM


I wnjoyed this greatly!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 2000-01-02 09:18 AM


We could all stand to learn from this dream.  Very symbolic, and yes, refreshing too...LOL

Michael

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-01-02 01:23 PM


He is the living water...and so much more to us! Wonderul!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Thaddeus
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 78
MA
7 posted 2000-01-03 12:59 PM


You tell a wonderful story within this poem.  It is easy to imagine being in the desert and being offered to drink from the sparkling fountain.  'Tis a wonderful dream, and dare I say, it's wonderfully true.  
Shirleeah Storey
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 68
Delaware
8 posted 2000-01-03 10:01 AM


For those of us that have been in a desert place, know how refreshing it is when our thirst is finally quenched by God. Your poem is truly wonderful. Thank you for reminding me that my thirst will be evenutally quenched but only by the one that loves us the most.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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9 posted 2000-01-03 10:28 AM


Wonderful dream, wonderful poem!  

 Denise


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