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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 1999-12-21 09:56 AM

Is morning's dew but angel tears,
...that fall throughout the night,
That melt away when God appears,
...and shares Son's radiant light?
And winter but the chill of hate,
...that spreads across the land,
Before God brings forth verdant spring,
...with touch of warming hand?
When reaper comes on noiseless feet,
...and steals away life's breath,
Will there come a judgement day,
...God's victory over death?
I know the answer for I've seen,
...the power of God's love,
That guides as beacon to us all,
...God's light doth shine above.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-21 08:34 PM

Beautiful, Mike! Simply beautiful!

Denise

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

2 posted 1999-12-21 08:45 PM

I like your poem for it suggests to me how that true spirituality seeks to find the meaning and significances in life as it pertains to God, and our relationship to Him.
To me that is the bottom line of what our life is all about. Thank you for your inspiring poem.

"Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

3 posted 1999-12-21 08:51 PM

Beautiful poem Michael. I notice how you arranged it in the abab formation. Good job on that too!

Nathan

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-12-21 09:37 PM

I loved it!!! Right now I could use that warming hand...it's cold here! Brrr! hehe

Very nice!!

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Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

5 posted 1999-12-21 10:29 PM

Such comforting pleasure in your lines! Thanks.

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

6 posted 1999-12-22 05:56 AM

Beautiful Mike...great job!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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