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Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 1999-12-20 07:30 PM



Her strong alto filled the church with grace.
She has everyone's attention.
The look on her face,
displayed lots of tension.
She dug down deep in her soul
and sang the song with all her might.
She shined like gold,
on this dreary night.
I felt her pain
and I felt her sorrow.
She's got me crying in vain,
like there was no tommorrow.
Yeah, she has a gift
as she turned my flame to hot from cold.
She has the power to uplift
because, she's got that soul!

 Nathan

© Copyright 1999 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-12-20 09:16 PM


Looks like you have soul too, Nate.  I like this.  Thanks.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-12-20 10:32 PM


I like this Nate. It seems certain notes in some music just bring me to tears. I don't know why, it's just always done that!
Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 1999-12-21 06:54 PM


What sweet comments from both of you, thanks!

 Nathan

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
4 posted 1999-12-22 05:52 AM


It is amazing what we can do with the gifts that the Lord has given us...Her singing, your poetry, looks like you are both doing wonderful with the gifts you have received, amen for that!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Kevin Taylor
Member
since 1999-12-23
Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada
5 posted 1999-12-23 12:44 PM


Soul Mamma! Ya, I can dig it. Fine poem... I can see / hear her there...

 

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