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poetry_kills
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since 1999-12-04
Posts 549
new orleans

0 posted 1999-12-12 01:22 AM


The author sat to write a book
And in his hand a quill pen took --
Bent thoughtfully over a sheet,
Imagining a story sweet.
Dipped his quill in the ink dark red --
The liquid of the Son who bled.
He pens with a loving, patient hand
The first word of his story -- "Man,"
Then with a sigh he wrote again
The second word -- and that was "Sin."
With teary eyes and one deep breath
He writes upon the paper "Death."
A soft smile spreads across his face --
The final word he pens is "Grace."


**jerome the boy with no brain

© Copyright 1999 Jerome Solomon - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-12-12 02:20 AM


I like this!  Hope to read more from you in here soon!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~



Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-12-12 03:43 AM


Very nice piece...speaks volumes....
Enjoyed the read much pk....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-12-12 02:51 PM


WOW!  WOW, WOW!  WELCOME TO SPIRITUAL!
I like this very much. It says so very much, it really does. I hope you have more to share with us!


 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season


sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 1999-12-12 11:52 PM


Love the awesome message flowing through and how thought provoking you make those four words!  Thanks
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
5 posted 1999-12-13 01:25 PM


Oh, wow...this one sure grabs you.  Very powerful piece.  wonderful.

michael

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