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Crystal Hudson
Junior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 11
Texas ---- U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-01 10:45 PM



Oh heavenly father
From up above,
Will you forgive me
And give me the wings of a dove?
So I can soar far away
From all this pain,
And I can find the
Happiness I wish to gain.
I know I have sinned
And walked away from you, Father.
I have noticed though all my sin,
My happiness has grown farther.
There is no greater feeling
Then to feel your high,
That is so pure and true
And washes my sins goodbye.
I'm glad your here
To help me.
You opened a path
That I now can see.

I Love You!!!

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© Copyright 1999 Crystal Hudson - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
Member
since 1999-10-24
Posts 64
USA
1 posted 1999-12-01 10:58 PM


Crystal, this was beautiful.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-12-01 11:19 PM


This was terrific! What comes to mind here is that we go through sorrow, but wouldn't know true joy without it. His grace is sufficient. Not always how we think it will be answered but it is always answered.
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-12-02 01:55 AM


Isn't is so wonderful to know God forgives you? Amen to that! This is a beautiful poem!

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~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-12-02 07:36 PM


Crystal,
there is no greater feeling than the cleansing we recieve from God. You have captured this well.

michael

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-02 08:18 PM


A beautiful prayer, Crystal.

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Denise


MADDavid
Junior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 26
Carrollton, TX, USA
6 posted 1999-12-05 02:37 AM


"Crystal"---hhumm--truly a shining "stone"...in the Bible a stone is used as a "parable" for a "witness"..thanks for sharing your heart,,Femmes'father...
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

7 posted 1999-12-05 04:15 PM


This is lovely - and full of such hope. Well done.  
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