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mirjam
Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-11-27 05:28 PM


eyelids sink, say
you are iron clad.
I'd like to carry you away, high
to float, fly through a tepid sky
and lift that compression -
erase your depression.
You shrug weighted shoulder
roll off blackened boulders
crawl into the light
steady, ready, needing to fight
and you whisper to me,
"I'd like to be set free."

© Copyright 1999 mirjam - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-11-27 05:39 PM


I think we all would like to be set free! Thankfully we have a God who wants to set us free, if all we do is but ask! AMEN!



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~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-12-01 10:44 AM


This brings to mind the song FREE, by Steven Curtis Chapman! If you haven't heard it, I would love to type up the words of the song for you to read. Too many for here though.

Seaangel
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand
3 posted 1999-12-03 02:50 AM


However you do it, in whatever style you are a fantastic poet my dear.
mirjam
Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246
Auckland, New Zealand
4 posted 1999-12-03 05:04 PM


Echo - i echo your amen on this one!
Wtdove - no i haven't heard that song but would love for you to type the words out if it's not too much trouble - just whenever you have time, email me if you like. Thanks!!!
Seaangel - well your words have touched my heart - thank you! What an encouraging comment!!!

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