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Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 1999-11-23 11:48 AM


This poem kind of came out of the blue sky.
The first four line came into my head and the rest was history. This is definitely one of my top 3 poems.


As I proceed,
to plant seeds,
in the earth,
I'll remember it for all that it was worth.
I'm proud to be so sound and profound,
about the love I've found.
My wife is my happiness, my pride, and my joy.
She's also the mother of my baby boy.
In the future, we would like to have a baby girl.
It would be a great addition to our happy world.
Thank you Lord, for overseeing,
our process through life as human beings.
And thank you Lord, for giving me,
the knowledge to see,
all that I can be,
in order to proceed.


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Nathan

© Copyright 1999 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-11-23 06:38 PM


A beautiful thank you, Nathan. So often we forget to see our blessings, and forget to try to proceed, especially in our relationship with Christ. May your future with your family hold many blessings.


Michael

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-23 09:46 PM


This is lovely! Thanks for sharing!

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Denise


Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-11-23 10:18 PM


yes, thank you for sharing this with us! Very lovely indeed!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-11-24 12:19 PM


I pray you get that lovely addition to your family! Well done! What a thank you it is!
deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 1999-11-25 06:17 PM


May I also say, well done, Nathan?
The thing that catches my attention, is not that we are blessed in so many ways--but that that these blessing have a purpose-an aim-a proper use, and that is that we may PROCEED. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

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"Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

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