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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462


0 posted 1999-11-22 04:39 PM


In reverent silence,
waits the day
as
holy hush of morn portends
advent of rising sun.
Darkness
pierced by darting rays,
arrows of first light.
Upon the land
night's benediction,
comes forth Jehovah's day.
From coralled temples of the sea
to mountainous cathedrals,
hallowed be his name.
On rising winds,
exultant anthems
Glory to the King,
As sky explodes
in
blinding radiance,
Behold,
the Rising
Son.


© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 1999-11-22 05:52 PM


Excellent picture you've painted!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-11-23 01:39 AM


Beautiful, Mike. Indeed, "the rising Son", says it all.


Michael

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-11-23 10:50 AM


Very good!

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-11-23 07:24 PM


Very nice, indeed, Mike! (I still can't believe you've only been writing for a year!)

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Denise


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