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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Angels will sing Harps will play Stars will dance When God Opens Heaven's Gates Humanity will unite Unnecessary death a stima of the past When God Opens Heaven's Gates Your hearts rejoice like a Raven's song Glory to the King When God Opens Heaven's Gates Hear the heartbeat who is near and furthest from your ear When God Opens Heaven's Gates Your spirit serene like blankets warm inside the coldest storm When God Opens Heaven's Gates Wisdom delivered from purest love. Truth an autumn breeze When God Opens Heaven's Gates Close your eyes just this moment feel the realness When God Opens Heaven's Gates (Thank you Echo for inspiring me to take this journey.) ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it, you will land among the stars.~Les Brown~ [This message has been edited by Julie (edited 11-19-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
While I can't say I completely agree with this one, it is very beautifully written. Nice job on it. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You've painted a peaceful picture with this! Excellent job Julie! |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I did close my eyes, and I did feel the realness. Thank you for taking the challenge. I will post mine later on! This is truly beautiful and I could not have desribed it any better myself! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A lovely picture you paint Julie..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
SD: no you don't have to agree w/it. Wasn't based on a true story. It was meant to imagine a serene picture. Thanks for the read. WhtDve: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed. Echo: Your suggestion was great. I am looking foward to seeing yours. Pepper: I am humbly honored. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Julie, a challenge well met. a wondrous image here, indeed. michael |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Michael...from my heart thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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