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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462


0 posted 1999-11-19 12:25 PM


Harvest that the angels reap,
Forever in thy kingdom keep,
Fruited fields of hallowed grace,
Unto thy glory we embrace,
Three as one, praise heaven's Host,
Father, Son, and Holy Ghost,
Splendor of thy Trinity,
Blessed peace eternally.

© Copyright 1999 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-19 12:37 PM


AMEN! So beautiful, Mike! You write good long ones and good short ones! This one is truly inspiring! Sounds so lovely, I can't wait! Dancing with the angels we will be!
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(Mike, I'd email you if I could, but I can't so since you are THE sonnet man, could you take a look at the ones I did and tell me what you think?! They are in open 4 The first is 'At Last I Call You Friend' and the next one is 'The Poet's Pen' probably a couple pages back!) Thanks (I don't mean to be a pest if I am)

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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-11-19 01:12 AM


Truly a beauty here! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us!


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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-19 02:19 AM


Beautiful, Mike, this sings to me. Glad you stopped by spiritual, hope you will share more soon.


Michael

Kenneth Ray Taylor
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since 1999-11-11
Posts 139
Duluth, Minnesota, USA
4 posted 1999-11-19 07:45 AM


A lovely song of a poem. Simple, yet echoing with a solemnity so lacking nowadays. In the fourth line I'd change the word "Unto" to "To," so as not to interupt the meter.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-11-19 10:14 AM


Impacted much with few words! Very well done, and thank you for sharing this!
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
6 posted 1999-11-21 09:34 AM


So beautiful Mike!
Beautiful....beautiful


Jenny Lee

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-11-21 09:48 AM


Yes, very beautiful Mike.......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
8 posted 1999-11-21 12:38 PM


Few words...speaks volumes!
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