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deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 1999-11-13 06:17 AM


If I were there what would I do
When Christ the Savior was betrayed?
Would I fare better than all the 12--
Or join in their "exit parade"?

I know what I would like to think--
Somehow I'd be diff'rent than them,
But alas, I know I am not that strong
For I too, am weak as a man.

With shame, I face my own weakness
What strength I have's from Christ alone,
'Tis the sick that seeks a physician--
How I need Jesus for my own!

For it's in weakness, I'm made strong
And then, that His Grace will suffice,
It's to Him I owe my life, my all--
Who unselfishly paid sin's price.

If I were there what would I do?
The same as all the human race,
I know that I'm Nothing of myself--
But Everything's by Love's Embrace!


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"Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-

© Copyright 1999 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-11-13 08:18 AM


An interesting question you ask there...I wonder what any of us would do in that situation?

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-11-13 01:41 PM


David, this is fantastic. I really loved this one!

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Denise


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 1999-11-13 04:39 PM


Wow, deleeme,
This one really makes you think...
A wonderful depiction. I, too, know I would falter to be in the place of the 12 deciples as I seem to so often here, today. I can only off praise to Jesus for His unselfish act, indeed, "Everything's by Love's Emnbrace!"


Michael

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-11-13 09:13 PM


Deleeme I love your work! You have a way of putting it!
Interesting question and it gives lots of food for thought!

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
5 posted 1999-11-15 02:54 AM


Tis an intriguing question indeed...I know (as you) what I would like to do and would hope I would have done, but I can not honestly say that I would have stood up for Him then. I was once faced with a tough question...someone had pulled a knife on me while I walking home from church one day about a year ago and asked me if I believed in God, I said yes, asked me if I loved Him, I said yes...this went on and on...Finally he said are you willing to die for this Jesus of yours (and stuck the knife to my throat) I looked him in the eyes and said yes...he dropped his knife and he is now involved in our church. I had the guts then to proclaim my faith and stand for whom I love and believe in, but I dont know if I would have done the same thing if everyone else was chickening out like they did when Jesus was betrayed. But I also do not know, because I was not there, therefore cannotgive an accurate answer. I would like to think I would stand up for Him, but I do not know! This raises a very interesting question though and this is a very great poem! Thank you for posting!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


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