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Sunshine
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0 posted 1999-11-11 03:32 PM


W.W.W.W.W. & H.

Wings whispering
Haunting melodies
Oh hear the Angels sing

Wondrous Angels
Hovering over
Angels taking
Troubles over

Worries of the
Heart
Enlightened in the
Night

When you allow
Heavens’ hosts
E’re come in your heart,
Really come in
Ethereal beings all

Worries to
Hasten away
Yes

and (because)

Heaven knows
Only
Wondrous things

©KRJ
8 September, 1999




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Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Michael
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1 posted 1999-11-11 04:30 PM


Very well done, Sunshine. Indeed, there is one answer to all those questions.


Michael

Pepper
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2 posted 1999-11-11 06:34 PM


Lovely Sunshine......

"Heaven knows
Only
Wondrous things"

Those words bring such comfort.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Julie
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3 posted 1999-11-11 08:23 PM


Loved this Sunshine...
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-11 09:55 PM


This is excellent, Sunshine! Loved it!

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Denise


Sunshine
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5 posted 1999-11-11 10:32 PM


Thank you Michael, Ladies...I had posted so many spiritual pieces at another site, but never thought to keep them...

would "Create" please set forward...?

WhtDove
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6 posted 1999-11-13 09:26 PM


Great one! Who, What, When, Where and Why...
hmmn, can all be answered in one place! Enjoyed this!

Sunshine
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7 posted 1999-11-14 01:40 PM


Whtdove, don't forget "How..."

Thanks for reading...

Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 1999-11-15 04:04 AM


Very good poem. very good use of an acrostic poem! I enjoyed very much! Great job!


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Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 1999-11-15 08:00 AM


Loved it. Thanks for sharing your inspirational talent with us.


Kenneth Ray Taylor
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10 posted 1999-11-15 08:21 AM


Cleverly written. I enjoyed it, but I had trouble understanding the stanzas before and after the "and (because)." Maybe I'm just thick.
JennyLee
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11 posted 1999-11-21 09:36 AM


You are shining Sunshine


Jenny

Sunshine
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12 posted 1999-11-22 09:26 AM


Thank you all for coming to read.
Midnight
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13 posted 2000-01-01 12:14 PM


Maybe I don't have any business saying this, because I'm not a really regular poster, but why is it that a person named suicidal dreams got yelled at for double posting his dark poem, but the happy poems about faith and love that are double posted are ok? I'm just wondering....and maybe I shouldn't drag up old posts for this reason, but I felt the need to.

Sunshine, I think the poem was to restricted by the acrostic style here, but the last lines were good.

Michael
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14 posted 2000-01-01 11:33 PM


Midnight,
    Suicidal Dreams posted in two "active" forums.  This poem was reposted from one of the no-longer active "archived" forums.  We have always allowed people to bring back a post from the archives - but still, then, only to one active forum.  I hope this clarify's the issue.  I would also ask such issues be brought up in the Q&A forum in the future.  It would probably recieve faster attention there.
     Secondly, I don't believe anyone "yelled" at Suicidal Dreams at all.  Maybe you should reread the replies to the post you are speaking of...He was treated very nicely, actually, untill he started misrepresenting the issue in the Alley.  An action, which by the way, he apologized for.


Michael


p.s.  Sunshine, I still love this one.



[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 01-01-2000).]

Sunshine
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15 posted 2000-01-04 10:22 AM


Michael, thank you again!  I still like it too!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



mirjam
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16 posted 2000-01-04 03:48 PM


I'll add my "I like it too" to that - along with an amen - all questions can be answered in one place indeed - loved the way you wrote this sunshine.      
Dark Angel
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17 posted 2000-01-08 06:49 AM


Excellent Sunshine!!! I Loved it!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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