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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-11-09 04:14 PM



You are my Light and my Salvation
my fickle flame flickers, leaves, shadows dissipate
You leadeth me, Oh Blessed Thought
but all i see are what my sins have wrought
Though I walk in the Valley of the Shadow of Death
I will fear no Evil
save the emotes i store inside
In You am I found
lost and lonely in this wilderness of life
I have gone ahead to prepare a Place for you in My Father's House
so cold and hungry
tired, my lungs rattle throughout insufferable night
longing and yearning
to find my way
Home


Alicat the persnikitty

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-11-09 05:57 PM


It seems I'm at a loss of words, love. I have my thoughts on this one, perhaps we can talk about them tonight over dinner. Well written, sug.
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 1999-11-09 08:40 PM


Very well written Alicat. Seems like a familiar spiritual battle!

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Denise


Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
3 posted 1999-11-09 08:45 PM


Wonderful piece Alicat...
Michael
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since 1999-08-13
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California
4 posted 1999-11-09 09:10 PM


I hope you find your way home, Alicat. I have spent many days lost and blinded myself.

Michael

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 1999-11-10 12:02 PM


In Him we are found, though we do tend to wander a lonely path at times. May you find it!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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6 posted 1999-11-10 05:03 AM


Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
7 posted 1999-11-10 11:10 AM


Sorry for the confusion guys.
I've been found in Him since 1988. This was inspired by a mental picture of a prodigal, seeking yet not finding the path underneath his feet.

Pax Christu

Alicat

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
8 posted 1999-11-15 01:49 AM


It seems that many seek yet have not found the path He has so wonderfully set before us...This is a very good and inspiring poem! Good job!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


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