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When you look at me

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vandana
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0 posted 12-27-1999 06:52 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I was surprised to see you,
I held my head high,
Dark clouds coming,
You didn't say a word ,
But you looked at me,
I see love in your eyes,
When you talk to me,
I'm in love with you,
When you looked deep into my eyes,
For a moment in time,
It seems everlastings,
Our love will never die,
When you gave so much love,
I'm still aware of those days of misery,
Since you 've come to my life ,
When your days and night,
Gets a little bit colder,
You'll touch me,
And look into my eyes,
A thought ,It was all untrue,
Untill there  all at once I knew
you would love me,
You stood still,
Feeling your heartbeat with  mine,
We drifted apart,
Here we are by my side
Beleieve what you say,
I was surprised to see you,
When yo talk to me,
You came to me
Day turned into night,
You talked to me,
Gave your heart to me
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Elizabeth
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1 posted 12-27-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful work, Vandana. Now how's about you joining the rest of us in Open #5?

Elizabeth

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Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."


JamesMichael
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2 posted 11-28-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very nice vandana...James
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nice, enjoyed the experience
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