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Thinking Knowing Wishing....coments PLEASE

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Kiwi
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0 posted 12-26-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for Kiwi   Email Kiwi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kiwi

Thinking Knowing Wishing.....

I lay here in bed knowing you are doing the same
But I know you are not thinking the same
i am thinking of only you...
Thinking of you and I together..
How happy we could be...
To me you are thinking thinking the same
Only deep down inside i am know you are thinking  that you are ith another girl...
A girl that is not me...
But I still deep down inside Know that nothing could ever be there...
Nothing there between us...
But hey...at least can still wish......


 
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1 posted 12-26-1999 02:12 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Kiwi, this has great potential to be a wonderful poem....go back and correct a few typos and re-read some of the lines that seem to need some tightening up and it will be great! Great thoughts you are trying to convey!

 Denise


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