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Let's Fly (Repost from #1)

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Denise
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0 posted 12-26-1999 12:18 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

  
Let’s traipse among the stars tonight
Come dance with me ’till dawn’s new light
Let’s waltz as one beneath the moon
-Come hastily – for dawn wakes soon.

Come sing a song with me, my Love
Pure harmony to rise above
The deaf’ning din that sure abounds
-’Till we but hear love’s sweeter sounds.

Let’s fly together you and I
Above the clouds – let’s soar so high
Transcending mountain peaks – each one
-’Till twilight’s nigh and day is done.

Come dance with me, Beloved, do
From this day on – ’till time is through
Let’s soar above life’s raging shore
-And sing love’s sweet song – evermore.


8/99




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1 posted 12-26-1999 12:21 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

This is truely great Denise.....It read like a dance to me......Soft and gentle.....and with style  

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Sally S.
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2 posted 12-26-1999 12:28 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Wow, Denise.  I thought the second stanza was my favorite but as I read it again, I noticed how wonderful they all were!!  Well done!
Martie
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3 posted 12-26-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Lets traipse among the stars--I love that image--the whole poem was lovely.

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
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4 posted 12-26-1999 02:15 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wonderful, wonderful - again...

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I like this...it's quite beautiful  
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6 posted 12-26-1999 12:42 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very beautiful, Denise, I agree with Martie.
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It's even better this time, Denise.
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8 posted 12-26-1999 03:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, First Knight, Sally, Martie, Severn, Ruth, Elizabeth and Balladeer for reading and for your kind comments! I'm glad you all liked it!        

 Denise


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9 posted 12-26-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Let's trip the light fantastic-lovely, Denise. I for one would love to traipse among the stars.  

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


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Thanks Elizabeth! Me too! hehehehehe....well at least we can dream!  

 Denise


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sounds good to me
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Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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