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I end it there......

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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-25-1999 07:48 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

like always im far away from the pain
like everywhere i dont quite belong
like all the things
you say to bring me down
wanting you all to like me
was always what i did wrong..

© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-25-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Full of pain and longing, Jackal. Very sad.

 Denise


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2 posted 12-25-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for guiltborn   Email guiltborn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit guiltborn's Home Page   View IP for guiltborn

i liked your poem's use of the straight and to point structure.  Not many can explain a point in short verse, it is a talent.
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I relate here
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4 posted 11-12-2007 04:20 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Sad... but i enjoyed it

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