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Open Poetry #4

I end it there......

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-12-25 07:48 PM

like always im far away from the pain
like everywhere i dont quite belong
like all the things
you say to bring me down
wanting you all to like me
was always what i did wrong..

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-25 08:27 PM

Full of pain and longing, Jackal. Very sad.

Denise

guiltborn
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 30
South Dakota

2 posted 1999-12-25 09:02 PM

i liked your poem's use of the straight and to point structure. Not many can explain a point in short verse, it is a talent.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-15 05:12 AM

I relate here

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2007-11-12 04:20 PM

Sad... but i enjoyed it

ARCTIC WIND

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