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First__Knight
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0 posted 12-25-1999 07:37 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

Today
~First Knight~

Today.....

I am ruined by your beauty, for
all else falls short.
How can anything be beautiful
after seeing you?

Beyond what others see, How is it
I see more?
Waves of feelings take over my
heart at the sight of your very
name.
My thoughts contain nothing but
you.

You say I am sweet, you say I am
special.
But I am but a reflection of what
I see.
My heart lives within your hands.
Can you feel it beat as you say
my name.
Do you feel the warmth as it
pours out to you?
How can I be expected to go on
knowing you are not with me?


Tell me please.......

Where does the light go when you
leave me standing there alone?


 Share what you are for you are what you share


© Copyright 1999 First__Knight - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 12-25-1999 07:41 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

First_Knight, This is so very beautiful....My heart lives within your hands.
Can you feel it beat as you say
my name.  I love those words. Beautifully written!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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2 posted 12-25-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful. Full of longing! I love it!

 Denise


samsonheart
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since 12-20-1999
Posts 72
Missouri rez.


3 posted 12-25-1999 08:43 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Very beautiful expressions in this one First_Knight, great job.  

samsonheart
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 12-25-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Knight: I was about to answer you when my poor pc couldn't cope with your emotions and had heart failure..*g*...and now I'm back it's time to say goodnight but wanted to say what a beautiful way to express yourself...good luck to both, it's about time the sun shone in your direction..

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

First__Knight
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5 posted 12-25-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Dark Angel...I am honored
Denise....IF she only knew truely how much longing there is.
Samsonheart.....Thank you
RainbowGirl.....Thank you for your words and I only wish my word could do that much damage.....hehe

 Share what you are for you are what you share


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
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Glen Hope, PA USA


6 posted 12-25-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tomorrow...

You see beauty in me
where all others
have failed to see.
Can I live up to your expectations?

I allow my heart to feel
once more,
and at times it frightens me.
What will come tomorrow?

My heart beats
at the sound of your voice,
but will it be broken again
if I let it live only for you?
You hold my life,
my heart,
in your hands;
and I am left praying
for a gentle touch.

Tell me please...

Will I die
without your life?




First__Knight
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7 posted 12-26-1999 12:41 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight


Should I die for lack of you,
Then it be just for my life began with you.
If the sun no longer shines,
you will be my light.
And if the moon should hide forever,
you will be my guide.
My hands open wide holding all that you are.
I walk with tender foot to ensure your destiny.
That place were you and I share....
That place deep in my soul.
This is tomorrow


 Share what you are for you are what you share


Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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8 posted 12-26-1999 09:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This IS so beautiful Sir....My best wishes for you both..

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


hoot_owl_rn
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since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


9 posted 12-26-1999 12:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Should I live because of you,
Then it will be becuase you have given life to me.
And if the darkness falls to soon,
will be because I've lost my light.
And if the moon should fill the evening skies,
unless you're there, the night will still be dark.
My heart is held within your grasp.
In you is my destiny.
Without you...
There is no tomorrow.


passing shadows
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since 08-26-99
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10 posted 04-15-2005 03:07 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh my...

I love this!
Artic Wind
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11 posted 11-12-2007 04:14 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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