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Kiwi
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since 12-24-1999
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0 posted 12-25-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Kiwi   Email Kiwi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kiwi

Sorry if this is really rough....I just wrote down what I feel and wel...this is how it turned out...

Just to tell you....

To just come out and say things...
It is so hard to do
But you just come out and say things...
It is just to easy for you..

I want to tell you that I love you
But I can't find the words
But I will close my eyes
And let my heart lead the way

I told you I love you
And I got no response
I told myself this would happen
I fell to hard too fast

If only I had waited
If only I had knew
You didn't fell that way yet
The way that I do

you told me things would not change
but no matter what they do
Thing are just to aquard
Between me and you........


 
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Georgia
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since 12-22-1999
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1 posted 12-25-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

Lovely poem...good work
sandgrain
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since 09-21-1999
Posts 3657
Sycamore, IL, USA


2 posted 12-25-1999 06:55 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Never fails to amaze me how we can't find the words we want to say to someone, yet can express it in poetry.  You said this so well, and that's why poetry is so beautiful.
Dark Angel
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3 posted 12-25-1999 07:52 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Very well expressed Kiwi   Well Done!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Kiwi
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4 posted 12-25-1999 10:54 PM       View Profile for Kiwi   Email Kiwi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kiwi

Thank you all very much for replying to my poem. I wasn't quiet sure if poetry was for me but now I know it is!! Thank you!!
littleJas
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since 12-22-1999
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5 posted 12-26-1999 08:33 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

Very good poem,  I liked it


Beri
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6 posted 12-26-1999 11:41 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Kiwi, this was wonderful and quite expressive.  I think poetry can be for anyone if they have some thoughts they'd like to express.  Poetry is a great outlet for just about anything,  I'm glad you've found the use for it!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

passing shadows
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7 posted 04-15-2005 05:11 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

good poem, even though you thought it was rough
Artic Wind
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8 posted 11-12-2007 04:19 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

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