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devina
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0 posted 12-25-1999 04:35 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina


I see the tears in your eyes,
as your arms stretch so wide.
Yet I can no longer be there,
I can't lick your wounds-
for mine are raw as well.
I'd die to dry your face,
of all the painful drops,
I'd heal you if I could.

Yet I can't remain under foot,
don't you see?
The only one wrong here is me,
I need some space to breathe?
It was three years of wonder-
of love and of learning,
but I'd hurt more by staying,
than ending this gracefully.

We can't stay as friends,
I've already been your lover,
your soulmate- your family...

I hope you find someone-
to love you as I've done,
someone to teach you more-
than hurtfullness in love.

Please forgive me-
I know not how to right this,
we've grown together,
and now we have grown apart.

When I find myself one day,
I hope and pray for God's fate,
that you won't be able to hate me,
that you'll still be in love-
in love with the love that was shared.

**my heart remains with you always**
© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-25-1999 08:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina -

Quite sorrowful ... yet beautifully done.
Merry Christmas to you.
~*Marge*~


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devina
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2 posted 12-25-1999 07:10 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Thank you Marge, and a Merry Christmas to you too!!
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Yes, very sad. And well done.  

 Denise


 
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