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poetic ramblin'?? just ramblin.

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samsonheart
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0 posted 12-24-1999 02:32 AM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

stay
sprinkled canvas of black ‘neath which we lie
stay tomorrow
and tomorrow do not say goodbye
stay longer
let me breathe the aroma that gets me high
stay forever
with dirty wings from murky past we will shake these beaten feathers and fly
say something
say anything to me
do not glance my way with piercing eyes and not expect me to yearn for a deeper look
wet your lips the way you do and expect nothing less of me, a devouring of your kiss
I have said many things to you which matter not
The words I long to speak.....trickle with cowardice back into my lungs
“I need you......
so stay.”
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WhtDove
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1 posted 12-24-1999 03:28 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Alright, I'm stayin! hehe sorry, couldn't resist. Convincing it is!

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Jesus is the reason for the season
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2 posted 12-24-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Samsonheart -
You 'rambled' with sure direction.
Sounds like you need to admit
the need to emit those words.
No better time than now, huh?
~*Marge*~

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hoot_owl_rn
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I really like this, I like the feelings it envokes  
samsonheart
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4 posted 12-24-1999 12:36 PM       View Profile for samsonheart   Email samsonheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for samsonheart

Thank you for your replies, everyone.  I just felt a tinge of loneliness last night and wrote that one up real quick.  I wish I still had the chance to say those words to her, but she's already gone. Livin' in Arizona.

samsonheart
 
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