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Master
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A stroke of light upon the snowy canvas,
And morning slowly rises with a yawn.
Inside the room, a smell of burning candles
Is quickly mixed with freshness of the dawn.
Just hours ago, the stars were gazing in
Right through window’s icy, silver mesh,
And warmth was penetrating through the skin,
When spirits met outside their fervent flesh.
Two lips were locked in an eternal kiss.
Their hungry eyes just seemed to bond them.
The ceiling shook from moans of bliss,
As ancient clay snowed down upon them.
And now this house, like a gallery of art,
Preserves that night, contains my heart.



 I fell in love and kept on falling





[This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-24-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-24-1999 01:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Master! What a lovely picture you have painted!

 Denise


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Thank you Denise!
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This is such a beautiful piece Master...


and have a Very Merry Christmas and Joyous New Year....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Thank you Pepper and I wish the same to you! Happy HOlidays!
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Master -
Such a lovely work to see on Christmas Eve.
May yours be merry.
~*Marge*~


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Thank you Marge, I wish Happy Holidays also!
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7 posted 12-25-1999 01:03 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

What a lovely poem-and it really is a nice picture too!

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


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Thank you Elizabeth, glad you enjoyed it!
 
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