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Beri
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0 posted 12-23-1999 07:44 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Beri

This was written only about a year and a few months after "Forever Friends"...in my opinion its not all that great bit I wrote it when I was feeling really down and out...
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"Four girls, four friends
Met along a common path --
The path of life.
All mere acquaintances of once...
Now to be Forever Friends."
Oh where oh where did that feeling go?
Have we lost it girls?
Maybe --
Time and the experiences of life brought with it
Brought us through hell and back
In only a year since my original.
Michelle, I reiterate --
You brought us together, you were always so strong,
Have I ruined that?
Could you still hold us together...
Our darling lone Aquarian?
Heather, Miss Compassion,
Can you keep your famous love flowing for us?
Could you mold us back together?
Liz, our Baby,
have you also been led astray?
We're in desperate need of your sensitivity here...
Could you help us?
And on to me, once again...
Oh what can I say?
Besides that I have screwed up!
I wonder...
Could I ever pull us back together?
I want that, I need that...
Girls, do you miss the "Fearsome Foursome" as I do?
Are we ready to try again?
It can't be one of us doing the work...
All for one, one for all...
Can we do it?
You bet -- let's try again:
"So here we are...
Four girls...always to be Forever Friends?!?!?"
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This attempted poem was our first step at rebuilding our lives together.  We decided to not let something so great slip away.  I hope you all have friends like this.  Its hard at times...but we're trying.  Soon we know we'll be strong again...


 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

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Munda
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1 posted 12-23-1999 07:59 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

True friendship will conquer it all. : )
Liked the way you wrote it Beri.

Merry Christmas !

Munda
Denise
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2 posted 12-23-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Friendship is a precious gift. It's worth anything you have to do to preserve it!  

 Denise


sandgrain
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3 posted 12-24-1999 12:06 AM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Hurrah for you knowing how precious these relationships are, and making an effort to resurrect it.  Nicely written.
Beri
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4 posted 12-24-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Thanx guys!  You caught exaclty what i was trying to say!

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

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5 posted 12-26-1999 02:11 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Friendship can take many roads - and I'm glad you're finding your back to each other.

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