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The bells of rhymes
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The bells of rhymes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The bells of rhymes There lived a princess in another time, Who kissed a prince in verse and rhyme, Awoke him from the living dead, By rhyming love into his head. In words she wove her golden thread And cloaked him with this golden web. Lead him to her ivory tower. And loved him there with all her power. And he loved her back in such adore, She could not ask such love for more. They built a garden, a fantasy world. Of phantoms and thing unsoiled. They spoke each other in verse and rhyme And lived in happiness for quit a time. But the world they lived was all a dream. And dreams come to an end it seem. He fell asleep one final day. And she laid his loving head away In golden threads of verse and rhyme. That rang like bells of golden chime. You can hear them still, this very day, Just read a rhyme and chimes will play. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Eloquent, beautiful, wonderful, flowing Well worth reading, rich and glowing If anyone asks me, what is it I would say, it's exquisite Love ya, Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I'm glad you liked The bells of rhymes It's a touch of how I think sometimes. Love ya Sy |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sy, I really loved this one ! From the first until the last word ! : ) Merry Christmas to you. Munda |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Munda, Merry christmas to you and thank you for the read and the nice comment. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I hear the chimes! Thanks for this delightful piece, Sy!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - The bell doth toll. I hear it in the distant night. Ringing out from the tower a cacophony of sound. Such talent you possess, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Very beautiful Seymour! Flowed just great! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, I'm glad you here the chimes of rhymes They sound and smell like a rose sometimes. *L* Sy Marge, To me you are a dove of rhyme, and I hear your bells all the time. *L* Sy WhtDove, But when speaking of love You can't beat WhtDove. *L* Sy |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Seymour: This is adorable.. HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh, I love this Sy!! You've got me sighing again...as you do so often... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RB, To my favorite rainbow, a basket of colored thanks. *L* SY Pepper, A sigh from you is like A nightengales coo. *L* Sy |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Wow, that's how I'd like to live! Of course, that's wishful thinking at its height, considering those last 3 stanzas...*sigh* Oh well. I suppose poetry is the closest we will ever come to that. Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Seymour! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Yes, this is very beautiful, and it should be above mine, so up to the top. |
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