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The worst poem ever written

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Anette
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0 posted 12-23-1999 04:11 PM       View Profile for Anette   Email Anette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Anette

chopping my fingers off,
one by one....
Taking away my ability to write,
my best futures in drawing.

A needle sewing my mouth shut,
forever,
so that I canít give loving words.
So that my ability to help is taken away.

Blood floats as my mind is going blank,
a river of not pain, but confusion and despair.
The best of me taken away,
whatís there left to love exept low selfesteem ?

~*Anette*~
© Copyright 1999 Anette - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 12-25-1999 06:29 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Dear, Dear, I so hope these are not thoughts about yourself.  Would Jesus die for someone unworthy?  You bet!  Not one of us are, but try to imagine how awesomely great His love for you is to die your death that you might have eternal life.  How can you have low selfesteem, when you are so loved?
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2 posted 12-25-1999 06:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I beg to differ, Anette. It is not the worst poem ever written. I'm sure everyone here is claiming that title for at least one of their own poems! Valkommen to our home.

Elizabeth



†Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes




[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 12-25-1999).]
 
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