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amber
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0 posted 12-23-1999 04:28 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber


ďAngelĒ

An angel fell before me,
On wings made of glass,
She told me that she's happy,
That I've found true love at last.

Her eyes were soft like velvet,
Colored vibrant blue,
She whispered no matter how hard it gets,
To never stop loving you.

Her hands were like pure ivory,
And the warmest glow arose,
From every breath that escaped her,
Every question came to close.

She said our love is eternal,
And to never give you up,
Even when it all seems lost,
Your love will be enough.

Her time was running short,
As she faded from my view,
Her words I'll hold forever,
"He'll never stop loving you."

I tell myself it must be real,
Not knowing if I'm right,
Because it felt like a dream,
That swept across my life.

Telling me in reality,
All that my heart knows,
There's no ending to our story,
No death to this love's rose.

But a book that's read forever,
Through each otherís eyes,
And the angelís grace that told me,
To us ~forever~ should come as no surprise.

© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Kevin Taylor
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1 posted 12-23-1999 04:33 AM       View Profile for Kevin Taylor   Email Kevin Taylor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Kevin Taylor's Home Page   View IP for Kevin Taylor

"And the angelís grace that told me,
To us ~forever~ should come as no surprise"

These two lines marry beauty and truth so well. So well.


 Kevin

"With oar on gunwale sounding role the village fishers flocked to sea"
DreamEvil
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2 posted 12-23-1999 04:56 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

This piece stopped me in my tracks. 'Tis very well done and worded. It likes me much.

 Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Sven
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3 posted 12-23-1999 08:27 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

This is beautiful. . .

the words seem to flow so freely. . . so effortlessly. . . you have really found the speech of the angels. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lost Dreamer
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4 posted 12-23-1999 08:41 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This Angel came to touch your heart and make it forever strong. The beauty of your words alone show how much love you already feel. This Angel will always be near guiding you as you reach for your everlasting love. May the beauty of the season shine through your eyes and illuminate every step you take.
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 12-23-1999 09:02 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This was a pleasure to read.
Very beautiful, indeed
Liz
littleJas
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6 posted 12-23-1999 09:20 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

What a beautiful poem , I can feel the love you convey in the words you've chosen . I really like it.

Jas
starboards
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7 posted 12-23-1999 09:41 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Great expression of emotions...i liked the use of an angel too..makes the love seem real...i like this one amber...    

Starboards


 
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Pepper
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8 posted 12-23-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Yes, a very beautiful piece Amber...
Loved the read!    

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 12-23-1999 01:28 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

amber,
The message was like christmas cheer
It came across nice and clear.
Beautiful poem
amber
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10 posted 12-23-1999 04:58 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all so much for your comments, i have missed you all so much, glad to be back after so long. thanks agian!
Denise
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11 posted 12-25-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Amber! I loved it!

 Denise


Elizabeth
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12 posted 12-25-1999 09:20 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I, too, am happy for you, Amber!

Elizabeth

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


First__Knight
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13 posted 12-25-1999 09:24 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

I will give it to you straight.......This was wonderful    Thank you

 Share what you are for you are what you share


Jim Hastings
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14 posted 12-25-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings

What a beautifull poem.  
I had to read it again.

Jim
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