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littleJas
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0 posted 12-23-1999 03:35 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

    " strange  "

Unsporting friends, caring enemies
Loss of feeling to the mind
Endless thinking, discard reality
No vision of words to be

An inner source of strength
Pushing towards the the top
Unknown people surrounded by friends
Watching, observing, looks of uncomfort

Forget the meaning of life's importance
Living alone but with company
See visions of futures history
Adventure not thought about

Now inspiration to go forth
A light to show the way
Toward tommorrows end




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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-23-1999 06:26 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sounds a little lonely,
A feeling craftily conveyed
Liz
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2 posted 12-23-1999 10:09 AM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

The first stanza pulled me in, because that's how I think things really are, unfortunately.

 --A Little Fairy--
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