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littleJas
Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39
Australia

0 posted 1999-12-23 03:35 AM


    " strange  "

Unsporting friends, caring enemies
Loss of feeling to the mind
Endless thinking, discard reality
No vision of words to be

An inner source of strength
Pushing towards the the top
Unknown people surrounded by friends
Watching, observing, looks of uncomfort

Forget the meaning of life's importance
Living alone but with company
See visions of futures history
Adventure not thought about

Now inspiration to go forth
A light to show the way
Toward tommorrows end




[This message has been edited by littleJas (edited 12-26-1999).]

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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-12-23 06:26 AM


Sounds a little lonely,
A feeling craftily conveyed
Liz

Fairy Colours
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US
2 posted 1999-12-23 10:09 AM


The first stanza pulled me in, because that's how I think things really are, unfortunately.

 --A Little Fairy--

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