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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-22-1999 11:33 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

you leave a little message
that youve been here before
but all you do
you forget
im still inside you
you hurry to erase another memory
creating mercy
which rushes to bury me
refusing to be allowed
to be placed underground
evolving into more of a monster
than you ever thought id be...
my god..cant stop
this effect you have upon me..

© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-23-1999 12:37 AM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

I hate this feeling...that someone is still inside of you...you cant listen to songs, watch movies, go to places because it hurts too much to think about...great poem!

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
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2 posted 12-23-1999 09:44 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

Its a great poem, the feeling it conveys Ive felt before


Jas
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3 posted 12-23-1999 09:55 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Jackal -
Think we've all been there ...
and eventually buried the memories ...
only to find that at some future time
we were able to uncover them and realize
that they were not so bad after all.
Takes time ... takes it's toll.
Wishing you memories in your heart to
make you smile.
~*Marge*~


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The Jackal
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4 posted 12-23-1999 10:15 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Jackal

thanks marge and thanks to everyone appreciate it very much..The Jackal
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5 posted 12-23-1999 08:01 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Like this, Jackal...it has a raw honesty to it that gives it power. Good job  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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