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Of sorrows and morrows
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Of sorrows and morrows |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of sorrows and morrows Like bats hunting in the night, Scouting silent in their flight. So sorrow swoops in covert dark Settling in a minds embark. Dropping the roots of sorrows sad. Blossoming in a bloom of bad. Wilting the spirits of employ, To an ennui of nought and coy. Where once was held the head of blaze Now stands in still the head of daze. Where once a spirit did uplift, Now the spirits lost its gift. In humble and in friendships flair. I would you take my hand in dare. Walk and talk with me of pardon. Before the heart does start to harden. Walk with me, the gardens of missive And we will siphon, spirits emissive. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Well, it seems the poetry is flowing again from your pen! This is not a poem about nothing. It's very beautiful Love ya, Liz |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Talk about a poem to make you think...I read it 3 times! (That's a compliment...either that or I'm taking my time in the comprehension area. LOL) Wonderful as always, Sy.  |
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littleJas Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39Australia |
I really liked it, great Poem, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Liz, thank you I did get a little flutter recently Nothing great but enough to keep me busy. Love Sy Sally, Thank you for the read and comment, I love to get responses. LittleJas, THank you much glad you enjoyed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sy, this one touched me deeply... Denise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - I'd say it's more than a 'little flutter' ... sounds like a flock to me. Walking and talking with you, my friend. 'Listening' to what you say. Love ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you so much for the sweet touch. Marge, You are a dear and quite sincere, And I thank you for the lovely cheer. *L* Sy |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Whoa! This poem is out there in terms of comprehension. Good job on the deepness. Nathan |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh , to be blessed with a vocabulary such as yours |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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