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Of sorrows and morrows

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-22-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


  Of sorrows and morrows

Like bats hunting in the night,
Scouting silent in their flight.
So sorrow swoops in covert dark
Settling in a minds embark.

Dropping the roots of sorrows sad.
Blossoming in a bloom of bad.
Wilting the spirits of employ,
To an ennui of nought and coy.

Where once was held the head of blaze
Now stands in still the head of daze.
Where once a spirit did uplift,
Now the spirits lost its gift.

In humble and in friendships flair.
I would you take my hand in dare.
Walk and talk with me of pardon.
Before the heart does start to harden.

Walk with me, the gardens of missive
And we will siphon, spirits emissive.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-22-1999 10:13 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Well, it seems the poetry is flowing again from your pen!
This is not a poem about nothing. It's very beautiful
Love ya,
Liz
Sally S.
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2 posted 12-22-1999 10:20 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Talk about a poem to make you think...I read it 3 times! (That's a compliment...either that or I'm taking my time in the comprehension area. LOL)
Wonderful as always, Sy.  
littleJas
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3 posted 12-22-1999 10:25 PM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

I really liked it,
great Poem,


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 12-22-1999 11:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
thank you I did get a little flutter recently
Nothing great but enough to keep me busy.
Love Sy
Sally,
Thank you for the read and comment, I love to get responses.
LittleJas,
THank you much glad you enjoyed.
Denise
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5 posted 12-23-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sy, this one touched me deeply...

 Denise


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 12-23-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour -
I'd say it's more than a
'little flutter' ...
sounds like a flock to me.
Walking and talking with you, my friend.
'Listening' to what you say.
Love ~Marge~


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Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 12-23-1999 02:17 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Denise,
Thank you so much for the sweet touch.
Marge,
You are a dear and quite sincere,
And I thank you for the lovely cheer. *L* Sy
Nate Dogg
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8 posted 12-23-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Whoa! This poem is out there in terms of comprehension. Good job on the deepness.

 Nathan
hoot_owl_rn
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9 posted 12-24-1999 09:33 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh , to be blessed with a vocabulary such as yours  
passing shadows
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wow
 
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