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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Continuance Certainly as the furrow cleaves through pasturage wrenching out rhizome, disturbing stalk, preparing the field for resurrection- * Age as surely furrows through existence- in germination, bearing fruit, harvesting its bounty from a generation. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
You Sir are one clever fellow. Well said, with a bow to you and yours. Happy and safe holidays. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Robert!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Where ya been? Great one Robert! Merry Christmas Buddy! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season Keep Christ in CHRISTmas |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Robert, Great poem! Imaginative and very well written! Liz |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks to all of you. This is a rewrite of a poem I posted awhile back called "Time". I just thought I would expand a few of my poems and see what happened. I have been busy again battling in another group. I wasted my time. You know I have found that yes, Dylan Thomas, Anne Sexton, Sylvia Plath and a couple of others were "great" poets. Yet they all killed themselves. I imagine they would trade being a "great" poet for a happy life. You all have a happy time with your families too. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Robert, Your rewrite is great, I remember the the "Time" poem which was also great, but this one dances as the message is relayed. May your holidays bring much happiness and inspiration to keep these poems flowing with such grace. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I agree with the consensus, Robert, wonderful word usage here. Corinne |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Well, well. My dear you are clever. --A Little Fairy-- |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
again, many thanks. I will keep doing what I have always done.....feeling. Robert  } |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and life goes on.. and on... |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
and on and on and on Nan!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 well done! |
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