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littleJas
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" Let Free "

Open Your heart, your soul, Your kingdom
A creature inside you is hiding
Don't ever give up on your beliefs
As your feelings are never not yours

Learn to feel hate, and of lust
Of which path the choice is yours
Let your mind take over your self
Use your power of life

Let forth the wisdom of your soul
And share your secret stones
Don't hide from your life
Exhaustion of living is the surface
It is underneath your spirit roams

Be free of speech and feelings
Be yourself, believing thoughts
You have given to others
no doubt you feel

© Copyright 1999 Jasmine Elkwood - All Rights Reserved
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Great poem, Jas! I like the line 'It is underneath your spirit roams'  Very nice!

 Denise


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Ash -
Little spirits roaming in this one.
Great job, hon.
~*Marge*~


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