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The Gods of jolly

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Seymour Tabin
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       The Gods of jolly

Whirling twirling virtues plight,
Dancing blithely in the night.
Whispering touching teasing,
Throwing seeds of dreaming..

Fantasies of blooming flowers,
All with scented magic powers.
Casting phantoms everywhere.
On fire flies that light the air.

Colors streaming in the dreaming
Twisting, laughing in the seeming.
Tossing wishes everywhere,
For bride and groom walking there.

Dancing on a dream of flight.
Into the forever night.
Holding hands into a realm,
Of wonder land and overwhelm.

My the gods have mercy in their jolly
And not turn jolly into folly.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 12-22-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
My, you do have pleasant dreams
Of pure delight and joy it seems
So much jollier they are than mine
Have you any more of the tasty wine?

Great poem!
I love it!
Liz
Mike
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2 posted 12-22-1999 11:00 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Enjoyed...  liked the use of the language.
Dr.Moose1
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3 posted 12-22-1999 11:21 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

I sense a note of caution said
Though it could be Justin Mihead
Denise
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Great poem, Sy! And yes, Dr.Moose, I agree!
(wow...did I do one of those 'read between the lines' thingies?)  

 Denise


Andrew Scott
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Well spoken Sir Sey. A fine read with an interesting twist at the end.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-23-1999 02:31 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Liz,
Oh yes my dear the celler is full and
Some day I'll pull a cork with you. *L* Sy
Mike,
Thank you.
Moose,
All life is a caution.
Denese,
Yes you did, thank you for the read and comment.
Scott,
Thank you for the interesting twist comment.
Coegwyr
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A lot of fine words well used (as always)

Thanks for the read.
 
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