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All I have is you

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vandana
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since 10-22-1999
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0 posted 12-22-1999 12:18 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

I always think about you
Though you're far,
My arms are begging,
To hold you tight,
Love is still there yet,
I'm here for you,
If you should call me,
You believe,
I don't mean a single word I say,
All I've to take your heart away,
I want to make you sure,
How much I care,
All the boys in town,
Have all the luck,
I don't have any luck,
I'm afaird I might lose you again,
I'm falling in love with you,
My arms longing to hold you,

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Fairy Colours
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1 posted 12-22-1999 01:53 PM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

You might want to edit the typo's and edit this poem so that it's much more flowing. This has potential. If you do decide to change the poem, e-mail me please, because I don't have too much time to go back over these poems, ya know?

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2 posted 12-22-1999 03:42 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

Yes...you might want to edit the typo's...it kinda takes away from the poem...

Starboards

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 12-22-1999 03:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

That's funny, nobody ever said anything about my typos. What they don't know is, I just don't know how to spell, oh well.
The thoughts in this poem are lovely
Liz
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