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To You Belongs

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littleJas
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0 posted 12-22-1999 08:49 AM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas


A deep feeling lies within
A body that longs for your love
A feeling of trust never to be betrayed
My heart to you belongs

A meaningful thought lies within
A brain that longs for your touch
A thought of closeness, never apart
My mind to you belongs

A wonderful excitement lies within
A conscience that of you is caring
An explosion of a kiss, always to be given
My soul to you belongs

© Copyright 1999 Jasmine Elkwood - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 12-22-1999 10:48 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

What a lovely poem! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you! Let me know if you have any questions!  
Georgia
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2 posted 12-22-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

Wonderful poem, great work.
Fairy Colours
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3 posted 12-22-1999 11:16 AM       View Profile for Fairy Colours   Email Fairy Colours   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fairy Colours

What a beautiful first poem!!! I am at a loss for words  

 --A Little Fairy--
Local Rebel
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4 posted 12-22-1999 12:28 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Ah Wilderness!!
Ohme
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5 posted 12-22-1999 02:53 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Very nice first poem indeed.
starboards
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6 posted 12-22-1999 03:15 PM       View Profile for starboards   Email starboards   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for starboards

You've written the best description on the effects of falling in love with someone and maybe they dont feel the same way, WELCOME to passions, my friend! And yes, excellent first post!

 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"
Sally S.
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7 posted 12-22-1999 03:24 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

I'm going to have to "ditto". (which I dislike doing) This is a wonderful first post!  Very heartfelt and warm. Welcome!!  
sandgrain
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8 posted 12-22-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Welcome! The commitment of ones heart is so very precious, and your lines say it so well.  Thanks.
littleJas
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9 posted 12-22-1999 07:31 PM       View Profile for littleJas   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littleJas

Thank you all for your welcomes and lovely replies.
Marilyn
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10 posted 12-22-1999 09:38 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. This is a wonderful introduction of your work. I hope to see more of you in the future. Kudos
Nan
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11 posted 12-22-1999 10:03 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You've portrayed some very intense feelings here, and formatted them quite nicely...
I enjoyed this one - looking forward to more
...and welcome aboard....

Denise
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12 posted 12-23-1999 01:34 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem! And welcome! Nice to have you here!

 Denise


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13 posted 12-23-1999 01:47 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  What a poem to start off with! Well done it is! Hope to see more from ya. Merry Christmas!!

 <*\\\><
Jesus is the reason for the season
Keep Christ in CHRISTmas

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wonderfully said
Artic Wind
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15 posted 11-12-2007 04:21 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Sad poem, touching

ARCTIC WIND
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